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Writing
 
Creative writing
 
Why do it?
  • Creativity only occurs when you are prepared to make mistakes. Individuallity comes from creativity.
  • Creative writing allows children to experiment with ideas and write with freedom of vocabulary and expression.
  • Creative writing is fresh, unexpected, original and fun!
  • Children are often more ready to tackle creative writing than teachers, as teachers can be scared! But other children in the world are developing their writing skills with creative writing at the centre of their studies, outstripping those children whose teachers stick to the old routine of chalkboard exercises, setting endless grammar and spelling tasks. Pupils of such dreary teachers are worth more than this and deserve a chance to catch up with the world.... and a chance to have more writing fun!

Where to start Talk and interact a lot and provide a stimulating working environment with an atmosphere that is conducive to learning and with easy access to words, phrases and spellings they might want to use.
 
Successful creative writing relies on lots of encouragement and praise, so start practicing at once!

Creative ideas to inspire creative writing
 
Visual Something visual as a starting point really helps. It kick starts their visual memory and the process has begun. You might use 
1) a box that looks as if it has been dragged out of the sea,
2) a picture, a large one if all the class is going to use it as the stimulus or, for individual work, smaller ones from the shoebox that is the class picture library,
 

 
3) a box wrapped up as a present,
4) a piece of a patchwork quilt, with each child choosing a piece and writing it's story. The writing can be displayed on the patchwork and, in this case, the children are not only considering the visual qualities, but the textures as well.
The following poem was written by a teenager, who was painting a design called "Patchwork" and she used this visual patchwork stimulus to write her poem.
 
Patchwork.
 
To open up my mind,
my mistake can be used to make me think to make something new.
I draw a patchwork quilt.
I choose a square,
I decide on a pattern,
I decide on a colour,
Dark blue? Baby blue?
It can be anything it wants to be
as the brush leads you,
as the colours show you,
as the patterns take you
 
 
Sounds At the risk of worrying your family and colleagues, go around your home and classroom testing out suitable sounds for creative writing stimuli.
Ideas:
1) the sound of moving sellophane can sound like the sea or the opening of a parcel,
2) corks tapped across a table can sound like footsteps
3) a C.D. of sounds or of music can inspire a visual picture in the imagination
4) a series of three or four sounds from objects on the teacher's desk could be connected to make a story.
 
Smells Can be very evocative and inspirational for creative writing. Use old matchboxes each with a small piece of tissue or lint inside, scented with bleach or curry powder or cinnamon or air freshener or chocolate or a herb. Get the child to choose a box, sniff the scent and imagine the rest.
 
Touch Using a blindfold, give the child something to touch that might stimulate creative writing, sand in a box, soft fabric, fur, a box of smooth pebbles, a rough rock, a coin.
 
Drama Here you can often successfully use the extrovert, the child who is full of energy and ideas to work with a group to create stimuli for creative writing. For example, teachers practicing this on a drama workshop were given three words to make up an improvisation. The words were:
    
 Hi,  Why,  Hello
 
 

 Where will the story be set? In a school playground.
Who will the characters be? A teacher and 3 children
What will happen?..............................
"Hi" say two girls, but one will not share her skipping rope. The disappointed girl goes to befriend the school bully.(as in the photo above) The skipping rope girl runs across and says "Why? why?" There is the beginnings of an argument and the teacher in the striped T shirt comes along and sarcastically interupts the girls with "Hello! hello!" 

How to get from the stimuli to the children creating their own ideas.
 
This gets better with practice, as the children need reasuring that, in creativity, there are no wrong answers. They can let their words take them anywhere.
 
They need to be relaxed as they create, so no pressure to "get on!" or "hurry up please", but gentle prompts like letting the children ask themselves Where? How? Who? When? 
 
Have drawn in a prominent place, some eyes, some ears, a nose, a hand and a heart. As the children create their ideas, this reminds them that they could describe what they see, what they hear, what they smell, maybe what they taste, what the feel on their skin and what they feel in their heart.  (See wall pockets below. Incidentally, the backing here is fabric and the front of the pockets is see-through net. Each top corner has some tape to tie the wall pockets up. The contents can be changed anytime and the whole wall pocket can be taken down, folded and easily stored, or, in my case, transported from school to school.)
 
Prepare to talk and interact a lot before starting the writing, although, when they have done creative writing regularly, they will probably ask not to talk, as they want their idea to be secret from everyone else, that is until it is written and ready to share.
 
Avoid questioning or querying what they are describing. How do you know what is in their imagination? Only they know that!
 

Experiment with different genres
Reported writing, descriptive writing, imaginative writing, play writing, character studies, "How to" writing, account writing, letter writing, post card writing, poster writing, poetry writing:
 
Imaginative writing One idea is to get a small group to move about and then one child shouts "Freeze!" .............Teachers at a drama workshop tried this.
 

"FREEZE!" Where are the two people? Why are they there? What are they looking at? How do they feel? What will happen next?

 

Character study writing can come from a picture, from a newspaper headline, or from looking at yourself in a mirror. Who am I? was dictated by a teenager who, as I scribed for him, watched the word pattern emerge and recreated it in the second verse.
 
 
Who am I?
 
Mechanics and Music... that's me.
 
The car goes wrong
You feel disappointed,
Embarrassed,
Or you might get angry!
You must relax,
Think
And plan to fix it....
And you can go to God too.
 
When music goes wrong
You get frustrated.
The string bursts
Your fingers hurt,
Your shoulders ache.
You take a break,
Seek advice
And you'll play better
And feel happier
 
You've accomplished something
 
 
Character studies can also come from drama. Here are three teachers at a drama workshop
 
 
Three chairs and three people. What sort of a person is the high and mighty one? Where is he/she? What does he/she look like? What does he/she do? And what about the down trodden one? What is he/she feeling? Why is he/she like this? What has he/she done? And the middle one? What are the hopes and aspirations there?
 

Story writing/essay writing. 
This paragraph really needs a whole book but some ideas are:
 
1)The Writing Frame
Some children like to write stories that go on and on and their enthusiasm should not be quelled, but to make form to their stories and to give shape to the essays of older students, consider introducing them to a Writing Frame idea.
Draw a fat ladder.  This is the basis for the frame. In the first space, at the top of the ladder, write the word "Introduction" and a few key words that show your plan for this, in the last ladder space at the bottom of the ladder, write "The end" or The sum up" or "The conclusion" and key words for this. In the intervening  ladder steps, write key words in each step to label each point or stage you will write about at that point in the wriitng.... to lead the reader from the beginning of the writing exercise to the end. Now you have your framework ready to tackle each step from the top to the bottom.
This method stops the writer wandering on and on and shows the reader, (or maybe the examination marker) a clear-cut, well sculpted piece of writing. (I also tell students it makes the marking easier for the marker and keeps them in a good mood to give you good marks! The marker can see where to put ticks!)
Take a simple example Title: "Lady Macbeth was constantly craving for power".
Top step of ladder..Introduction..Sometimes was, yet sometimes wasn't
Next rung of ladder. She showed she was in scene ..
Next rung. She showed she was again in scene...
Next rung. She showed she was not when...
Next rung. She also showed she was not at...
Bottom step. In conclusion, Lady Macbeth was often.....but on the other hand....
Teachers on Courses.
I have explained the writing frame idea to Dominican teachers doing degree courses and it has not only been a successful method for them, but it has also given them a lot more confidence in tackling written assignments. In some cases, once they have labelled their ladder or writing frame, they then put each label on a separate card filed in a box in the writing frame (ladder) order.
Then, when doing any reading or when coming across any relevant quote, they pop this in the appropriate section in their box, all in preparartion for writing the first draft. I used this method when writing my M.A. dissertation. I had a shoe box of labelled cards behind which, and in appropriate sections, I collected quotes, book titles with page and paragrah references, cut-outs from professional magazine and newspapers. So I used a writing frame principle in a shoe box to get an M.A. It wasn't so hard! 
 
2) Beginnings, middles and ends.
Following a similar principle to the writing frame method above, encouraging writers to understand structure in story and writing, the following idea proved very popular at a recent teacher workshop.
I took two, large, margarine pots and a dozen or so lids. I cut off the rims of the lids, so they would fit inside the pots. The two pots were decorated as they were to be the two containers for the now recycled lids.
 
One pot was labelled "Story Starters"
 

 
..........and on individual lids I wrote such story starters as:
Oh dear, I had lost my bus money. Now what could I do?
Well, how would I know I had a pot of disappearing dust?
I woke up extra early because....
The bottle on the beach had a letter in it, which said.....
I'd always wanted a pet, but not such a big one as this!
What a surprising invitation! It said.....
It all started when I found....
A ticket to go anywhere? I'll choose to go...
Bang! There was a knock on the door and...
I'd never been on a space ship, so didn't know what to expect.

                                   

                       

 
The second pot was labelled "Story Endings"
 

 

..............and had writing on individual lids such as: 
From then on, Grandad always made sure that that particular door was firmly locked.
And the bus was left hanging empty over the edge of the cliff!
And that is why the rocking chair appears to rock on its own!
And the cruise ship, although hours later than it should, finally sailed off into the sunset.
And that's how Granny ended up with the sweetest little kitten you could imagine.
After all that, it turned out to be a really happy day.
So that carpet was really magic after all.
And finally, by 11 minutes past 1, I was in bed and fast asleep.
 

 
Displaying creative writing creatively.
 
This is a crucial part of the creative writing progress and should never be ignored!
 
It tells the children that in being creative, they took a chance about making mistakes and they are to be congratulated on the creativity they have achieved!
 
No pinboard? Use an old chalkboard or beg a big cardboard box from somewhere, open it up and hang it from string. Or get a sheet of styrofoam from an electrical supplier and hide it in a fabric bag. Then be creative about how you back the children's work.
 
Reported writing in the form of a newspaper article can be displayed backed by old newspaper.
 
Descriptive writing of a forest or wood can be backed by brown packing paper with the creases scrunched in it even more and with a brown wax crayon rubbed over it to make it look like tree bark.
 
Poems about fish can be stuck on pieces of cereal boxes cut out into fish shapes and suspended from some drift wood that you found on the beach.
 
"How to" writing about growing a tree could be displayed similarly, with the work hanging from a branch that has been fixed somewhere in the classroom.
 
Adventure stories set underwater can be displayed on bubble wrap
                             about a time machine can be backed with old calendar pages
 
Imaginative writing "When I think of yellow" can be backed by scrunched yellow supermarket bags. (Many  are yellow here, but you would choose the colour most easily available to you.)
 
Character studies can be illustrated by magazine cut out pictures of people stuck in shoe boxes and put brick like on the wall.
 
Other creative backing display ideas
 
String up really big leaves for backing creative writing titles like "Lost in the forest" or "The Millipede Walk"
 
Use sheets of thin, styrofoam, (polystyrene) that comes as packing. If it is bent use the bends and display it three dimensionally. Don't always assume that backing should be flat on the wall and square on. If you can't fix to the wall, put a string across the wall or the classroom and peg work onto it.
 
If you live in a colder climate, you might have access to old stretchy nylon tights, which can be made to look spooky! Cut off the toe and slit lengthwise up the leg. Tie a corner to a fixed point and stretch the nylon in any direction and attach it to the next fixed point. Slash it into holes as you go! Join on another piece and go on and up and sideways stretching and attaching. With the light behind it has interesting swirls. Title? "My Pet Spider" of course or, in the case of Dominica.."Anancy Adventures".
 
 
Find what you have an abundance of for backing. Here we have blue banana bags that can be sponged clean and used. I have seen excellent displays of children's work written on white paper and backed by black bin liners cut open. We can find lengths of fishing net on the beach and drift wood. Bakers can give us plastic flour bags as flour comes onto the island in those. Use what you have creatively.
 
Whatever you use, make sure that you display children's work in a way that makes them feel they are being congratulated on their work.

Encourage children to be free by allowing them to draft work first and then edit and them publish a best copy for display. Children should not be confined to one piece of paper to do their final copy on or they feel restricted to make a tidy presentation from the start at the cost of their word ideas and experiments. Let them work on rough paper to get started.

Marking Creative Writing Creatively 
 
Be creative in the way you mark the children's creative work!
 
Write positive comments, preferably refering to a specific creative idea of the childs that is in the writing. And be careful! One young lady I know was so upset when she was ten and was told to predict the future in creative writing. She wrote about something high tech and she was so proud of her idea, but the teacher's negative comment of "A little far fetched I think!" dampened her enthusiasm for writing. Only 15 years later, that far fetched idea was, through the wonders of modern technology, everyday. "I still remember the effect that that negative comment had on my creativity" the young lady says. 
 
Do not overmarkIn being creative, the children were taking chances and do not want to be put off from doing the same again by an over use of red ink. Red ink can be like poison to their efforts. Make a personal note of specific weaknesses and plan follow-up work from that.
  

AND after all the work involved, allow children time to read and admire the work, not just classmates, but other pupils and teachers in the school and parents and visitors too. Get the children to invite them in. Both you and they deserve a chance to feel proud!